I truly agree with most of the points that you made in your blog this week. The comparison between Harpur and Kendall is very detailed and most of all I really liked how you broke down both poems and found the similarities as well as the differences that can be found in each. One thing that can be improved on is your repetition of words like “Meanwhile” . But not to worry that can easily be fixed with the use of synonyms, don’t worry I always used to repeat the same words. Overall, this post has to be one of my favourites I’ve read so far, keep up the good work!:)

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