Hi Emily,
I love how simple and clear your blog this week is and simultaneously is summary and honesty is brilliant.
Your relation to the reader, the story and the author all connect really well. I also appreciate anyone who has the IT skills and knowledge to provide an addition video, it was awesome!
One thing you maybe could have added was an elaboration on how reading this text affected you.
Overall, you’ve done a great job, I’ll be looking out for your blogs more often! šŸ™‚

https://emilydickblog.wordpress.com/2016/10/01/blog-7-2/comment-page-1/#comment-47

 

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