I really appreciate someone who can take the time and effort out to detail and pull apart a thought-provoking essay such as this one. The way in which approached the letter through your structure and your clear and concise diction provided me with a sense of realisation why George Orwell stated the English language to be “ugly”. I also really enjoyed the connection you made to an excerpt from George Bush’s “War on Terror”. It depicted that good writing can be used with words used in “everyday life”.
Overall you’ve done a brilliant job but maybe a photograph might have given us readers a visual opening to the letter you have written for your blog.