Hi Victoria,

Wow! I also choose this question and the character but our responses are done in a way which is unique to our writing styles.
With every word and new idea, you bring up it all flows. I really applaud your mention of “Yes she is a product you have manufactured, but she is not a daughter you have loved.”, because for some reason I don’t even think Godfrey Cass sees the damage he has caused in this little girls life and his own by not claiming Eppie as his own. Instead, she’s been yearning to feel that masculine hole inside of her that she finds in Silas Marner.
Your concluding paragraph is structured in a way where you are looking into Godfrey’s mind and forcing him to hear what you’re saying. He has done the wrong thing but he now has to live with the consequences of his actions.
Maybe, you could of adding a picture but I don’t really think it needs one as your words are already so vivid!
You’ve done a fantastic job!!

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